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Amanda and Rachel Meet Outside by Torqual3D Amanda and Rachel Meet Outside by Torqual3D
A scene from Part 6 of my latest story, Outfoxed. [link]

If you want to know what it's all about, you'll just have to read the story! Starts here: [link]

Background by Torqual3D.
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Even without context, this is a beautiful, almost tranquil picture disturbed by undertones of tension: The blond (Rachel) is clearly edgy here. The blue-eyed brunette (Amanda) is tense, but maintaining her composure. The two young women are holding hands, but their posture and sway implies that they are walking briskly, as if anxiously hurrying. Clearly, they are bonding in the face of imminent trouble. Rachel's breasts are smaller than Amanda's, which is a nice touch because her build is slighter. The distinctness of each girl's face and physique clarify that these are individuals, making them "real" to us. TASTEFULLY BEAUTIFUL AND SUBTLY TENSE.
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KOwriter1996 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Amanda looks very hot here! Great work!
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. I wish this picture could get a few more favourites.
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darkhound1 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Here is another one, lovely picture :)
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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DemonLeon3D Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
wow I Love This ,so really :)
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you do :-)
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:iconneehko:
neehko Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Outstanding, your skill is just amazing. Beautifully done!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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SuikTwoPointOh Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
Oh Amanda, I don't think you can trust that foxy blonde...
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:iconko-corral:
KO-Corral Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
I feel uncomfortable just looking! <XD The tension (not just between them) is in the air!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:-)
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:iconal-818:
AL-818 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAY!!!!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TNS!
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:iconal-818:
AL-818 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL yup ;) and Amanda does look so good in a TS!
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Fatal-Quintessence Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
This looks great even down to the background!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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masterpogo Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Amanda looks great as usual.

Rachel looks different!!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Because you're seeing her slightly from below and also she's not smirking.
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gundam20012005 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Pretty
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Bowski--Productions Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Although a fan of the written story, Amanda will always be head & shoulders (& breasts) a better character visually to me than Rachel; who looks a little boy-ish for my tastes.
Amanda Jones in the Cellar 22 is one good reason why that knitted sweater in this new image above deserves some 'hands-on' attention.
Nevertheless you've created a good, clean image here.

The photo reminds me of Rackham Industries from Nancy Drew. I assume you get lots of opportunities to take pix on your travels. I believe you were in Brisbane with Chonostock.
And recently you're location has changed from UAE to El Salvador, to French Polynesia. Travels broadens the mind does it not?
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Try as I might (and I try very hard) I cannot create a character better than Amanda. I am still rather proud of Rachel though. What you've seen so far is the tip of the Rachel iceberg. I have a drive full of Rachel concepts, that I am not going to upload. (Doesn't that remind you of Blackadder II when he says, here is a purse of monies that I am not going to give you?)

I don't know what you mean by Rackham Industries (and I don't know N.D. at all well) so do be kind and give me a reference link?

As to my location, Amanda and I have to stay one step ahead of the Illiterati.

By the way, you mention above the location where this photo was taken. ;-)
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Bowski--Productions Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
You have every reason to be proud of Rachel & her appearance works great. I like her. I love Amanda ;)

Believe it or not I saw that episode of Blackadder last night in bed on DVD! The wise woman episode. Uncanny!

As for ND it's no biggie. Rackham Industries is the commercial complex in River Heights where Nancy lives. We have an Industrial area not too far from the suburbs where I live & I always draw the comparison between that & Rackham too.
I'm guessing the picture was taken in UAE. No Illiterati there surely :XD:
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Erm UAE doesn't look like this....

Remember that Amanda and Rachel are in a prestigious New England university that never gets named...
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Bowski--Productions Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Lol. I didn't realise the photo would be the 'actual' campus; I should've known!
I always imagined the action was taking place in Boston, U.S.
It doesn't take a 'wizard' to realise I w'Oz' wrong... (sorry about that one).
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It seems I have double confused you......The story is indeed in Boston!

The picture is in an unspecified location, but is supposed to represent an actual scene from Part Six.
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Bowski--Productions Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Lol. You said I mentioned the name in my earlier comment, so I assumed you meant Brisbane.
There's a New England in Australia too :XD:
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The picture was TAKEN there but it's supposed to represent New England USA. Problem is, all the time I was in Boston it was bloody raining. Thus I don't have a sunny day picture to use. You can always rely on the Sunshine State though to give a perfect blue sky.
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Blades-123 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautful faces, lovely lighting and environment, top class work.:)
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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blx666 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Niceeeee
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acurmudgeon Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Beautiful. I will have to go read the story now. Thank you for sharing.
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Please feel encouraged to give feedback on the story, positive or negative.
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acurmudgeon Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
I will try to read it this weekend and I will give you my feedback. Thank you.
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:iconbobko:
BobKO Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
AWESOME! <3 Amanda! Rachel looks good too!
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Rachel fans are relatively quiet at the moment but her favourites count is speaking for itself...
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MarkH3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excellent image!
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grimweird Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Oh and also, the background looks truly superb.
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. My photo :-)
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grimweird Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Augh! I thought you rendered that yourself...
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry to break that illusion :-)

It's still my photo though. I take a lot of stock photos for use with Daz Studio... when I see anything that inspires me. Take a look in the folder [link]
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grimweird Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
BWAHAHAHA!!! I do believe you've captured the typical expressions of women when they see me for the first time... "OMG!" and "Eww..."
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are you that horrendous!?!?
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:icongrimweird:
grimweird Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Well not really... Folks say I look like a Klingon with haemorrhoids whose Bat'leth just broke... I.E I look really mean...
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SimonJM Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
That's nicely done!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.
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bogarthat Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
You've captured Amanda's innocence and Rachel's cunning in this very well. Rachel's eyes cut like daggers, nicely done!

:D,
Mike
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. Fortunately they are my characters, so it's not at all hard to align the writing and the visuals!
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