Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Ciara's Egyptian Nightmare 18 by Torqual3D Ciara's Egyptian Nightmare 18 by Torqual3D
Ciara's Egyptian Nightmare (Continued)
Story by Torqual / Text by Rosellafan

The mummy bent down with stiff broken movement, reaching beneath the bare small of Ciara’s back, and under the soft silkiness of her thighs in their patterned black tights. It was a stark contrast to the revolting rot of its ancient cold hands. Ciara was picked up effortlessly. Her shapely legs settled into position and the soft pinkness of her skin held closely to the disgusting grey green horror that was the mummy’s decayed flesh.

The mummy began a slow and deliberate walk deeper into the secret pathways of the pyramid, carrying its prize. Ciara's head was tilted back exposing her long fragile neck. Her bangs were pasted to her delicate forehead by the sweat of desperate fear in those moments before. One gentle arm was draped across her bare midriff, while the other dangled lazily in sway with mummy’s jagged gait.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconaaronflythe:
Nice! You definitely got all the detail. But I was thinking maybe the mummy needs more wrapping on the legs. And you wouldn't like more wrapping, just make the skin that's not wrapped look a little more dead. Being as though the mummy would have had to die in order to even be a mummy, the appearance should still look dead. But other than that, great work, your really good and this is an awesome piece. Keep up the good work. You definitely have a lot talent. (don't mind whats in the parenthesis, just trying to get the 100 word minimum)
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
9 out of 9 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconaograi:
AOGRAI Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This pose is really good.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.  If you want to use it, I may release it in a Pose Pack in future.
Reply
:iconaograi:
AOGRAI Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey it's kool. I sometimes like to do it from scratch, but sometimes in a rush, you hate to have to do all that.  Some of these poses will probably do well in the market I guess.
Reply
:iconkitiekat4u:
kitiekat4U Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautifully done. :clap:
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
Reply
:iconkitiekat4u:
kitiekat4U Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome :hug:
Reply
:iconfreyrstrongart:
FreyrStrongart Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist
beautiful posing. Really all limp.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.
Reply
:iconeidolon1:
Eidolon1 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She's definately mummy's girl
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ho ho
Reply
:iconhhemken:
hhemken Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Very well set up and lit! Beautiful render.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
Reply
:iconplinius:
plinius Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She wears nylon stockings on an expedition?! :-) Good rendering though.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's explained in the story.
Reply
:iconsarkananight:
Sarkananight Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing! :D :D
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.
Reply
:iconsarkananight:
Sarkananight Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem.
Reply
:iconkitiekat4u:
kitiekat4U Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
absolutely wonderful :heart:
Reply
:iconpatriot-112:
Patriot-112 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sexy, limp girls being cradled
Reply
:iconthecollectorsmanips:
TheCollectorsManips Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
absolutely love this! Can't wait to see where it goes from here! :D :D :D
Reply
:iconmonsieurpaul:
monsieurpaul Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Absolutely superb ! She looks so offered and limp here, delicious.
Reply
:iconshadow-ninja-zero:
Shadow-Ninja-Zero Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Love how you used a sound explanation to compensate for poser/daz hair being notoriously difficult to pose in an upside down kinda way for armcarries :P
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Who, me? :-)
Reply
:iconshadow-ninja-zero:
Shadow-Ninja-Zero Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
In all seriousness, great image :winner:
Reply
:icontazirai:
Tazirai Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Arm carries = awesome.
Reply
:iconhappyhateday:
HappyHateDay Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
wow theres a fetish for everything, i hope someone figures out how to get in there and hopefull they find her.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Or at least find her sandals.
Reply
:iconpulpheadhorsemen:
pulpheadhorsemen Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
i change my mind, i would kiss her neck, then her lips and then her belly... Your work is the most realistic and beautiful at the same time i have ever seen... congrats! keep up the great work...
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
Reply
:iconrickbeast:
Rickbeast Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Wow! She looks beautiful. I love everything about how she looks in this pic.
Reply
:iconnawabazone:
nawabazone Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
cool. is it from a game?????
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nope.
Reply
:iconmasterpogo:
masterpogo Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Cradle wins, guess I'm gonna have to wait for that OTS.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did you not see the Chonastock story last months? OTS beat cradle into production.
Reply
:icongundam20012005:
gundam20012005 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
She does look beautiful in this shot and the caption is well written also. Excellent work man.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Text is by Rosellafan. If you have not checked www.perilsofdawn.com yet then you should.
Reply
:iconbobko:
BobKO Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
great carry!
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
Reply
:iconbogarthat:
bogarthat Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
:D :D Now THAT is what I've been waiting for!!! :D :D

you had every right to brag a day early, Torqual. Bride of the Mummy indeed! Bravo!!! :clap: :clap: :clap:

Where do I start? The light on her exquisite neck has a master's touch. I love Ciara's limp hands and her lovely stocking clad legs. All topped off by the mummy's leering gaze. Perfectly Brilliant!

:worship: :faint: :D

This belongs on the cover of 1930's pulp magazine!!! Well done!

:squee:,
Mike


Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. It's fair to say that it was all leading up to this. I am hoping this one might push Amanda Jones in the Cellar 28 off the number one spot. As much as I love that story it's irritating that something I did a year ago is still the most favourited image.
Reply
:iconbogarthat:
bogarthat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012
Eh, I wouldn't get too caught up in statistics. Think of it as a testament to the timeless appeal of naked peril! :)

Mike
Reply
:iconbacknblackjls:
backnblackjls Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
This is what I have been waiting for. The pace of the story is great, the anticipation almost painful. Great carry image and I also agree that a few angles of this would be great. Good work by all.

John
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I may add a few extra angles some time in the future. I hope you enjoyed this image a little more because of the 17 days of painful build up. We've gone from not knowing what would happen to Ciara, to thinking she would escape, to watching her hypnotized with ill-concealed glee, to finally realising with horror that she wasn't going to make it. I feel that this preparation was needed to fully appreciate this picture.
Reply
:iconbacknblackjls:
backnblackjls Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Yes, it is moving at a good pace and flow. Similar to the way I write, I start with the beginning and the ending and the rest just flows at it's natural pace. Or what I feel is it's natural pace. Sometimes I go off the rails a bit, but that is part of the fun. I really look forward to each and every update of Ciara's plight

The writing is good, and once again your attention to detail is spot on. The turn of a hand, the angle of the head, the mouth, hair. It is the little things that make good great.

Thanks for all the work, it is indeed appreciated.

John
Reply
:iconblades-123:
Blades-123 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excellent lighting and atmosphere.:)
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And by the way, this pose is a heavily edited version using your 'carried to the altar' as a starting point. I am a rascal for not crediting you. Thanks for sharing that pose, and the others.
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
Reply
:iconeljosuelight:
ElJosueLight Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this! 8D
Though I wish the mummy would've brought her shoes along or slipped them back on her feet. x3
Reply
:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Originally the story was written with Ciara still having her sandals on at this stage. But I preferred this image with her stocking feet as she looks far more vulnerable. So I re-wrote the story. Also, I think it works better as a standalone image like this. The shoes only work in the context of the story and I do feel that many people would find them jarring if this was the only picture that they saw.
Reply
:iconsqualllion1:
SquallLion1 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
outstanding
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×




Details

Submitted on
January 25, 2012
Image Size
657 KB
Resolution
1280×1024
Submitted with
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
30,780 (2 today)
Favourites
281 (who?)
Comments
59
Downloads
901
×