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Rachel and Amanda at Sam's Bar by Torqual3D Rachel and Amanda at Sam's Bar by Torqual3D
A scene from Part 7 of Amanda's new story: Outfoxed [link]

Amanda heads out to meet Rachel to discuss the ancient stone tablet; but things don't go as planned for either of them.

If you really still have not paid any attention to the story, despite all of my efforts, then I will forgive you if you go here and start reading it. [link]

Thanks to wjbr04166 [link] for the inspiration for this picture. I don't mind admitting that this one took me three evenings... mainly getting the lights right. I hope it conveys the atmosphere and goes well with the story. Sam's Bar is based on the Cheers Bar in Boston, which I visited a few years back. Pictures in here... [link]
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:iconyellowplasma:
The bar has the feel of an old establishment with a casual atmosphere. Both female subjects are posed expressively and their faces show that they are having a conversation. Their clothing fits as if REAL clothes on REAL people. Amanda's pantyhose reveal the tone of complexion AND the gleam of fabric perfectly. Amanda Jones is the best part of this pic, in every way: Her hair and face look the most natural and her posturing make clear that REAL weight settles and must be balanced (so as not to fall off that stool). The lighting is perfectly, realistically broken. IN SUMMARY: The subjects are unassumingly beautiful and their environment is wonderfully quaint.
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:iconshysissymaid:
shysissymaid Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
very nice work dude
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:icondavidhanseat:
davidhanseat Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice.
I think i really have to start reading your stories.
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well given your interest in the gallery and characters you probably should!
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:iconseline-chlora:
seline-chlora Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
I wish we could see more Rachel and Amanda in the future ;)
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But you WILL!
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:iconseline-chlora:
seline-chlora Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
looking forward to it! :D
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:iconshoes74:
shoes74 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Boots vs pumps
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:iconmalwjones:
MaLwJoNeS Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
I think U have done a great job, keep up the good work
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconmangamick07:
mangamick07 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
exceeptional
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconsnipergiirl:
SniperGiirl Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its really realistic great job :D
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconsnipergiirl:
SniperGiirl Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem :D
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:iconeggmanteen:
eggmanteen Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
way past cool
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
way thanks!
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:iconeggmanteen:
eggmanteen Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
welcome ;)!
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:iconmarkh3d:
MarkH3D Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great scene! The lighting is great. I always love your poses, they're very natural as are the expressions.
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconmiketee10021:
miketee10021 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Must agree with SimonJM - fantastic work on both the lighting and the posing!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconrunswitharmour:
runswitharmour Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
very very nice
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bogarthat Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Hey if it was Cheers, I guess the girls were lucky that Cliff Clavin didn't come over and lend his robust knowledge of ancient Mayan civilizatiion to the discussion... LOL

:D,
Mike
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha :-) I'm afraid those characters are long gone, including Sam himself.
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:iconblades-123:
Blades-123 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The environment is excellent and the subtle posing and expression sells the relationship between the two of them beautifully.:)
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :-)
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:iconaihanming:
aihanming Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Lovely!
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:iconsimonjm:
SimonJM Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Superb lighting and posing!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.
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:iconarthurt2015:
ArthurT2015 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm attracted to her brown boots.
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They are nice, aren't they. Rachel always wears boots.
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:iconarthurt2015:
ArthurT2015 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes they are. Still... awesome work.
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yellowplasma Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks exactly as I imagined it! Though both girls have their legs crossed, Rachel looks more like a lounging tomboy, whilst Amanda has more of a girlish posture. If I only knew this picture, I would pick out "the blond with the revealing top" as the dominant of the two personalities: Rachel is speaking with a demeanor of confidence. Amanda is hanging on her every word. We learn from the chapter, however, that Amanda Jones is vulnerable, but not really a follower. At heart, she is more self-assured than Rachel Fox.
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's exactly what I was aiming for. Lounging tomboy with a bottle in her hand. And Amanda hanging on her every word.
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:iconmasterpogo:
masterpogo Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Couple of gorgeous ladies having a chat!!
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gundam20012005 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Wish I was sitting at that bar right now...sigh what a great pic.
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too...
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:iconamaniwolf:
Amaniwolf Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Oh Amanda, my fave girl!
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And mine :-)
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:iconvhamelin:
VHamelin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I can only imagine that both their drinks are spiked. So they won't be sauntering too far. hehe.
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:icondl77:
DL77 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
somehow when i read the story, i pictured them sitting at a table. Doh!!! :)
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They met at the bar first, waiting for their table.
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:iconcidrael:
Cidrael Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Great movie as well as a pleasure watching this pair of pretty girls.
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:iconmorfe22:
Morfe22 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Another stunning image, great poses and I could look at Amanda's legs in tights all day long :)
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too :-)
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:iconvaughanp:
Vaughanp Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Good job, above everything the ease of the blonde girl.
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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CuriaDD Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I love how you write a story and are able to bring the images you come up with in your head to life like this!!! it's truly amazing :)
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:icontorqual3d:
Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. A few years back I would never have thought of being able to do this. Does it match your vision of the story?
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:iconcuriadd:
CuriaDD Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
pretty close yes!! :)
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