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wormmtong Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016
I'm surprised Amanda hasn't encountered any tentacles.
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lucky for her!
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:iconwormmtong:
wormmtong Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016
but not for us
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Orion-dreamcatcher Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
read "The Casket Keeper" today.
I gotta say, your style of writing is very good, inspiring and imaginative.

So,... is a story version of "Amanda Jones in the cellar" available?
Keep up.
Your writing is very inspiring.
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TheGrandOleRuski Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016
Hey so I was thinking, we always see your (very lovely) sleuth girls on their misadventures but I can't recall any recurring villains for them to face. It may just be that I haven't searched your page enough but perhaps I could interest you in an OC villainess I just thought of. Allow me to introduce...Anishaa Roze! Anishaa is of mixed British and Indian descent and grew up in one of the many slums in India, hers in particular being located just outside Delhi. Having seen the worst life has to offer, she had developed a misanthropic and nihilistic view of the world and human life in general. Desperate to get out of the slums she was raised in, she quickly and ruthlessly rose to the highest ranks of organized crime in Delhi and eventually formed a united Indian Mob after eliminating or absorbing the various cartels. Though she now is undisputedly a major behind the scenes power player in the country, Anishaa is ever the paranoid sort, suffering from nightmares of her downfall and return to poverty. She decides that the best way to avoid this is by expansion into other countries, specifically prosperous ones in the West...which is how she comes into contact/conflict with Amanda and company. At only 21 years of age, she should be a long running enemy to the sleuths.

As for abilities, her hand to hand combat is very good, having killed various Indian cartel lords with her bare hands. Her intelligence is off the charts, shown by how she strategically rose to power and even now keeps many influential politicians in her pocket, further serving her interests. Do to her non-existent morality, she has managed to excel in some of the darker elements of organized crime, namely organ harvesting and snuff films (which often go hand in hand). Charismatic since a young age, her personality is able to quickly get people on her side and trust her, a skill she uses to tirelessly expand her empire...and to eliminate threats or perceived threats. She has no family to speak of, her mother vanished without a trace shortly before Anishaa began her rise to power (coincidence it is not). Her only real allies are those that are dependent on her or fear her. She owns two pet ligers (lion tiger hybrids) that she enjoys feeding her enemies to.

Anyways, that's all I have. I hope you consider the idea! :D
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Torqual3D Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very creative and interesting - she reminds me a little of the villainess from Kill Bill.

I do have recurring villains but don't let that stop you if you are interested to write a story involving your character Anishaa and perhaps the Summer Sleuths (Amanda, Hannah and Kat).  I am always grateful and honoured to inspire any fan fiction, so why not have a go and upload something? I can include it belatedly in my Summer Sleuths story competition folder here...

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TheGrandOleRuski Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
If I were any good at writing maybe I would. Lol, I doubt people would want to read high school freshman level writing when they could easily find better. XD
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TheGrandOleRuski Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
It makes it worse that I've been graduated for 2 years....
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